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The Revenant

October 30th, 2016 Comments off

Happy Haloween. To celebrate the day here’s a free story from my short story collection The Edge of Reality (available on Amazon)


Marie did not think she had any more tears within her but here they were, revenantfalling again. She had cried ever since the Magistrate had sentenced her beloved Fritz to death for the killing of the man at the festival.

Yes, it had been Fritz’s hand that had struck the man; yes the strength of the blacksmith had been such that the smaller man’s neck had snapped, killing him instantly. The law did not care that Fritz had been defending Marie against the wanton advances of the drunkard. The death was an accident, Fritz had not intended to kill the lecher; merely stop him from touching Marie.

Marie had pleaded with the Magistrate to have mercy but he had just repeated over and over, “The law is the law.”

Marie had wept as her fiancé was led from the court. She had wept each of the three nights she had been permitted to visit him in prison. She had wept as he was marched to the hangman’s tree. She had wept as his body was cut down and then dumped in a common criminal’s grave, far from hallowed ground.

The Magistrate would not relent in his sentence, the Priest would not relent in his insistence on this foul burial; now Marie wept again, tears soaking the soil of his unmarked grave not far from the town’s midden.

It was tradition that criminals not be given marked graves on hallowed ground but Marie knew her Fritz deserved better. Even if there was no stone for her beloved, she knew where he lay and she had visited his grave each day for a week, watering the soil with her tears.

Marie had cried herself to sleep beside the small fireplace. The fire had guttered as the night deepened so Marie woke to darkness when she heard the scream.

Gathering her shawl about her shoulders Marie rushed to the door seeking the source of the commotion. A woman’s screams echoed in the night. Lights were being kindled in windows up and down the central street of the small village as the inhabitants roused themselves to deal with the potential threat.

Men poured, half dressed, from their homes waving their women to remain safely indoors. Marie’s man was dead; there was no one to stop her from wandering down the road with the men.

Near the center of the village a woman was gibbering incoherently. Marie knew her, the miller’s wife. She was dressed only in her woolen nightgown and was huddled at the base of a huge oak outside her small stone home. Her hair was wild and her eyes rolled like a horse frightened by a snake. She struck out at the well meaning men, driving them back all the while hunching tighter into herself and continuing to scream.

Realizing the men were not helping, Marie forced her way through the crowd until she reached the terrified woman.

“Inga. Inga, calm sweetheart,” she spoke in a soothing tone as if to a child.

Reacting to the calm female voice, Inga looked up from safety of her own arms. Her crazed eyes looked at Marie yet seemed to stare miles away through her.

Her screams lessened to a choked cry and she threw arms around the smaller woman and began to weep into her shoulder.

“Tell us what happened dear,” Marie prompted, stroking the woman’s hair.

Inga shuddered and raised her head from Marie’s shoulder. She looked at the younger woman and then around at the crowd of men, each staring with confused or frightened eyes.

“It was a spirit, a foul spirit. It was a dark man dressed in rags carrying a coffin on his shoulders. It, dear God it looked at me and I could see the fires of the Pit in its eyes. I knew it had come for me – for all of us. I cried out and it walked onward. It came to kill us all,” she dissolved into crying screams once more.

Marie, and several other women newly arrived, helped the miller carry his distraught wife into the house and put her to bed. One of the older women brewed a tea which helped Inga finally go to sleep. The crowd returned to their homes, assured that it was nothing more than a hysterical woman.

The Magistrate was found dead the next morning.

The Magistrate, being an official of the crown and an outsider lived alone. The woman he paid to clean his home discovered him at mid-morning. The woman was distraught from the sight. Some sickness had taken the man in the night. His throat was swollen and his eyes bulged from their sockets. The Magistrate’s tongue was protruding and black and had filled his mouth so completely that it must have choked the poor man.

The Priest and the village doctor were the only men who dared enter the home. They cleaned and blessed the building to keep any disease from spreading then quickly buried the Magistrate in the Church cemetery. Normal public rituals were foregone in favor of quickly interring the body to protect the village.

That evening, another woman and her husband spotted the nighttime prowler. A huge dark man dressed in rags, they described. He walked through the streets carrying a coffin on his shoulder looking from house to house with burning red eyes. The specter disappeared near the Church.

In the morning the Priest was found dead. His body showed the exact same symptoms as the Magistrate. The doctor ordered that no one but himself deal with the body as he was already exposed to whatever illness was loose in the village. He also ordered the housekeepers of the two deceased men to remain in their homes for the next several days.

The people began to whisper that the spirit was a revenant, sent from the Pit to kill them all.

The next night, the revenant was again seen walking the streets.  In the morning Svetla Cooper awoke to find her husband dead beside her with blackened tongue and swollen face. None could fathom why the revenant had chosen to kill this man but leave his wife alive.

Marie felt a growing fear. She thought she knew why Evard Cooper had died; he had been the hooded executioner the day Fritz had been hung. Dread filled her broken heart; she knew she must see this being if it walked the streets again.

As the sun sank toward the horizon the villagers retreated to their homes. Fires were built higher than normal; prayers rang out from behind shuttered windows. Fear ruled the village. Marie alone sat outside her home and waited.

As the moon set near midnight Marie spotted movement on the road. Wrapping her shawl tighter, she walked toward the source of her fear. A sickly grey green phosphorescence emanated from the tall form limping down the road. The shape was that of a man, tall, muscular and dressed in rags. The form limped along under the weight of the coffin it carried on its left shoulder. Marie could smell the fetid odor of the grave as she approached the revenant.

Marie made a holy sign over her breast and muttered a prayer then stepped into the road into the path of the lurching spirit.

The revenant turned its face toward Marie. She cowered as eyes like dull red embers lit the ground between herself and the apparition. A sob and fresh tears were wrenched from the girl. She would know his face no matter the ravages worked upon it. She knew and loved every curve of his face, knew every muscle of his form; there was no doubt, the revenant was her beloved Fritz.

“Oh Fritz,” she sobbed. “What has become of you? Why are you doing this?”

The revenant turned its eyes fully on Marie; she felt her very soul shrivel under its glare.

“Vengeance,” it whispered in a voice like stones grinding against each other.

“Fritz, please. Don’t,” she cried.

The revenant paid her no heed and began its lurching progress again. As it passed the girl she felt an electric shudder pass through her and she collapsed, feeling weak and ill. Marie watched the revenant walk deeper into the village, unable to move or even cry out. The spirit stopped at a doorway and disappeared; Marie attempted to cry out again but instead fell unconscious.

Marie woke as the sun rose, still in the middle of the road. She was sore in every part of her body. A scream shattered the silence of the town; Marie wept, knowing what the screams meant.

Marie felt her resolve harden. She knew what must be done. As evening came she gathered her courage and walked to the blacksmith shop, empty since Fritz’s death.

She took a shovel that Fritz had made for a villager but not had the chance to deliver, gathered a small pile of poles, some rope and a tinderbox then began her journey to Fritz’s unmarked grave.

She knew the legends; a revenant must be destroyed by fire on holy ground. Now that she knew who the revenant was, she knew she was the only one who could put Fritz to rest. She could not tell another, she could not bear Fritz’s memory being further destroyed.

As the sun set she reached the spot she knew so well. A small cluster of purple flowers grew on the ground so well watered by her tears. Fresh tears fell as she set spade to ground and began to dig.

Criminals and the unshriven are not buried deeply and Marie quickly reached the body of Fritz. His coffin was a simple pine box. Using the shovel she pried the lid from Fritz’s tomb. Marie gasped as she uncovered the form of her lover. The white wrappings that had covered the body were shredded to mere rags and his beautiful muscular body was swollen beyond belief. The skin stretched taut and his face was turgid and suffused with blood. Fresh tears burst from Marie’s eyes as she beheld the ruin of her lover’s earthly form.

Marie gently prodded the swollen body with the shovel and the skin split like a bag under pressure releasing a torrent of blood. Blood flowed from the corpse in a volume well beyond what a single body could hold. It was as if the corpse were a giant leech that had ingested the blood of many men. Marie screamed and fell back from the grave calling upon God to protect her.

As quickly as it filled the grave, the blood receded from the coffin and into the earth leaving the battered, blood soaked corpse of Fritz exposed once more.

Weeping in fear and horror, Marie crawled into the open grave and began to wrestle the body of her lover out of his coffin. While he was alive Marie could never have moved Fritz as he was easily twice her weight but in death his body had become lighter, perhaps the torrent of blood had taken most of the weight with it. His form was now more like it had been in life but somehow less substantial as if the departure of his life force had removed a tangible part of his mass.  Marie struggled but soon freed Fritz from his grave and placed his body on the ground beside the grave. She quickly lashed together the poles creating a makeshift travois onto which she rolled Fritz’s body.

As she placed the body a sickly glow enveloped it and the revenant suddenly stood above the body of the man it resembled. The revenant turned its baleful eyes on Marie making her knees tremble but she held her ground and the spirit began its limping progress toward the town.

Panting from her exertions Marie took up the poles of the travois and frantically began to drag the body toward the Church. She scrambled and pulled with every ounce of her strength knowing that she was in a race with the revenant. If she lost her race, another of her friends would die.

Marie strained and pulled, moving the travois no faster than a walk. Splinters drove into her soft hands and she fell more than once, crying out as rocks tore the flesh on her knees and shins. As the Church drew near Marie almost looked like a revenant herself with her torn muddy clothing and blood covering her arms and legs.

Marie looked along the road and spotted the revenant’s glowing form standing in the center of the village. She could see the fire pit glow of its eyes sweeping the small stone houses, searching for a victim.

“God, help me,” she cried out dragging the corpse of her lover toward the gate and the hallowed ground of the Church cemetery beyond.

Marie let out an hysterical laugh as the travois bounced from the path into the cemetery, she was going to make it.

The small hairs on the back of her neck rose and Marie frantically checked on the progress of the revenant. It had not entered a house; it had changed its course and was now limping toward the churchyard where Marie was sprawled in exhaustion.

“No, no,” she wept, this time in terror rather than sorrow.

Frantically, Marie looked for kindling. Small twigs and leaves littered the churchyard; scrambling about on shaking legs she gathered these into her skirt and began to run back and forth, dumping piles of flammable debris on the corpse.

The revenant was only yards away from the church; Marie gathered the materials from the tinderbox with shaking fingers.

“Vengeance,” the revenant moaned as it entered the graveyard.

Marie focused on her task, too terrified to look back. She knew that she only had one chance to do this before the revenant reached her.

The sparks from the flint flew onto the charcloth which blazed to life. Marie could hear the dragging shuffle of the revenant inches behind her. She must end this, even if her own life were forfeit. Trusting to God, she shoved the blazing charcloth into the pile of kindling and closed her eyes, waiting for whatever the revenant would do to her.

Marie felt a rush of heat and heard the crackle of the fire starting. She waited as the heat increased yet nothing touched her. She did not feel the electrical feeling she had suffered before from the revenant’s gaze. Marie dared to open her eyes; the fire was beginning to grow around the body of Fritz. His funeral wrappings and skin were beginning to burn even in the low flame of her twig pile.

Turning her head she looked and saw the revenant still standing behind her. Its eyes were no longer blazing with the fires of the Pit but were Fritz’s blue eyes. Marie stood, fresh tears welling in her own eyes.

“Fritz, I’m sorry,” she cried.

“Thank you,” the ghost said.

Marie reached out a trembling hand but the ghost was immaterial and her hand encountered only air. Tears poured down her cheeks as she felt the cleansing fire behind her flare. Fritz smiled at her with all the love he had shown in life and his ghost faded from view.

Marie’s tears slowly stopped; she knew that she was done with weeping.


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Lord Cthulhu’s Bane

October 29th, 2016 Comments off

On my Facebook page I challenged my readers to join me in composing short fiction for the Halloween season. Imagine your favorite character in fiction or  movies encountering the Cthulhu mythos. I asked for stories of approximately 1,000 words or less and have promised to share them on my blog with proper attribution.  Interested in participating? Either visit the FB page and post or email your contribution to me at:  dewight at

Here’s my own contribution:

Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn.

#flashfiction #picturefiction #Cthulhu #fanfiction #ThomasCovenant

Lord Cthulhu’s Bane

 Thomas Covenant shambled across his living room. His coffee table was covered with the remains of last night’s meal.

His stomach rolled when he saw the congealed sauce covering dried out tentacles of calamari. It was the most disgusting thing he had eaten since recovering from his long illness after he was last summoned to the Land.

“Unclean food for an unclean man,” he muttered.

He rubbed the scar on his half-hand and dropped into the chair he had spent most of last evening in. Truth to tell, he spent most evenings in that chair. His life in the real world remained a merry go round of boredom and shame.

He glanced at his typewriter, untouched for weeks. He had dreamed last night of dark shapes rising from the pond in the woods, finned horrors from beyond the darkness. Perhaps he could use that dream and finally write something.

The images were still fresh in his mind, fresh enough that he felt his skin prickle with sweat as a rush of remembered dream fear resurfaced.

Covenant pushed himself up from his chair and started toward the typewriter when he heard a thud from the porch. Another thud followed close upon the first. That one sounded like something soaked with water hitting the boards and splashing the wood with its moisture.

Covenant instinctively fingered his wedding band of white gold. It was an emotional crutch here in the real world. In the Land it could lay waste to any threat but here it was only a leaden reminder of all he had lost.

A wet splash came from the other side of the door. His curiosity overcame his unease. Stomping to the door he reached out with his half-hand and grasped the knob.

The knob turned and the click of the latch slipping free was joined by a gurgling roar. The door crashed inward slamming into Covenant’s chest. He was hurled back into the room. He managed to stay on his feet and watched as the man – no, it was not a man but a creature. It reminded him of an ur-vile with its long thin arms and its stooped posture but where the ur-viles were black; this abomination was the mottled green of a sea creature. It opened its mouth revealing dozens of needle teeth and roared again. Covenant backed away from the prehistoric sea beast and felt his heel catch on something. The world was yanked from beneath his feet and he fell. His head met the corner of the table and stars exploded behind his eyes. The remains of his dinner flew into the air and rained down on him. The last thing he saw as darkness took him was tentacles as the calamari landed on his face.

* * *

Covenant awoke to the sound of pounding surf and the warmth of the sun on his chest. He opened his eyes and knew immediately that he was in the Land. He groaned and sat up. He knew this place. The SunbirthSea rolled in its eternal flow beside him. Looking north he could glimpse the spoiled plains, still rife with Corruption’s malice. He also knew what lay behind him. He dreaded turning around. He could see in his mind’s eye the tumbled remains of Foul’s Creche on its promontory of cliffs. Why had he been returned? Was Lord Foul once again threatening the Land? What of that monster invading his home? Was his helpless body even now being savaged by the beast?

A bubbling sound reached his ears. It sounded as if an enormous pot of water had come to a furious boil but this pot would have been the size of an ocean.

Covenant turned and looked past Foul’s Creche where the blue-green waters of the SunbirthSea bubbled and churned. Something appeared in the roiling waters. It appeared to be an island rising from the depths to join its brother landmasses basking in the sun. Mats of kelp and sea slime coated the rounded surface of the island which continued to grow and rise.

The island continued to rise and its sides soon began to curve inward. As Covenant stared, aghast, enormous milky orbs broke the surface of the water. Eyes, somehow this titanic shape was a face. Had the Despiser crafted some new abomination to conquer the Land?

Higher the face rose from the water revealing writhing tentacles. The creature’s shoulders and torso soon cleared the waters. It soon stood taller than the cliffs and blotted out the sun. Its skin was a sickly black-green and appeared alternately scaled and slick as if it could not decide to become reptile or some other form of life.

Covenant felt his fear kindle the wild magic within his ring. 

White light erupted around him, exploding from the white gold of his wedding band to form a coruscating ball of power that mirrored the violence in his soul. Screaming in fear and rage Covenant thrust his half-hand toward the towering horror and white flame flowed upward to strike the creature. The monster’s tentacles parted and its black maw opened wide to swallow the light of the wild magic. Pushing harder Covenant felt his soul pour toward the creature which drank the wild magic as if it were water. Unfazed the creature made a sound that he thought must be a chuckle.

The flame of wild magic soon flickered and died. Covenant fell to his knees, drained in body and spirit. He looked to his ring which now appeared tarnished and dull. The magic was gone.

A new sound reached his ears, chanting.

An enormous crowd of black ur-viles and green sea creatures like the one who had invaded his home capered madly on the beach between him and Foul’s Creche.

“Ia, ia! Cthulhu ia!” they sang with voices like drowned men.

Covenant felt his sanity fracture as the sea titan strode ashore and into the Land.

 The End?

 Thomas Covenant and other characters/locations mentioned were created by Stephen R. Donaldson. I claim no ownership of these characters and present this as a writing exercise and a work of fan fiction.




Review: Apparition

October 27th, 2016 Comments off

Apparition by Michaelbrent Collings

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

This is one spooky, disturbing book. Everyone has heard of filicide – no not felicide the killing of a cat – filicide: the killing of one’s son or daughter. It shows up in the news more often than any civilized, right thinking, person would like to see. Now what if it isn’t just a bunch of crazy people who snap for no reason or collapse under the weight of post partum depression? What if there is some dark, ancient and hungry force driving parents to kill their children?
Yeah, that’s the subject matter of this book and it’s very well done.
I loved one of the phrases used as a chapter opener: Parents don’t kill their children to protect them from the monsters, they kill them FOR the monsters.
It is a non stop creepy ride from beginning to end although as I hit the final chapter I just knew where it was going to end and couldn’t understand why there weren’t things in place that would have stopped it (I won’t elaborate to avoid spoilers).
If you are not afraid of the subject matter this is a really good journey to one of the darkest sides of humanity.

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